Thursday, 27 March 2014

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Problems In Boarding House
                Boarding House is like my second home, so I try to make myself feel comfort. However, there are many problems there. Such as cleannes, quietness, security, etc. Some of Boarding House doesn't keep the cleannes. For example, bathrooms and the water aren't clean enough and not many of them. Accordingly if we have a class in the morning, we have to wake up early if we don't want to queue. Otherwise, we will be late for lecture. The other problem is about the quietness. Roommate is very helpful if we need some help. On the other hand, he can be very disturb when we're studying. The other problem is the security. The security is not guarantee, our stuffs can be stolen such as bike, sandals or clothes. As a result we need to be careful to keep our stuffs. Those are some of problems, but not all Boarding House has a problem.

7 comments:

  1. good job
    pay attention to the use of punctuation for conjunctive adverbs

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  2. well done, Rob. emm, i found a mistake about singular and plural. Let's take a look ; Some of Boarding House doesn't keep the cleannes. It should be "do not" because the subject is plural.

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    1. I see :3
      Thanks a lot for your correction ;)

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  3. Uwaow the life of kosBoy. I've just known it :P

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